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Hi all,

This is not a "plug" just after some honest critique on a website I have finished for a sportswear company:

You can view it at: http://www.gamefacesport.com/

Online kit designer will be up in around 6 weeks. Thoughts & "positive critique" would be appreciated.

If this isn't allowed, I do apologise, msg me and i'll remove it.

Tar

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first bad thing i noticed is you have an ugly man and no women on the first page

strike one

OK can I have some intelligent critique then..

lol

First impressions are good, clean layout with no clutter.

Looks clean, clear and simple.

I was wondering if you need to display each categories sub-section. It's not a problem now, though if you added another main category you would run out of space?

Netball has a spelling error in 'skorts'.

I would also run the site through http://validator.w3.org/ as some of the code needs a bit of attention!

Hope you don't mind the comments, they're the things I prefer to hear before I show work to a client.

Looks clean, clear and simple.

I was wondering if you need to display each categories sub-section. It's not a problem now, though if you added another main category you would run out of space?

Netball has a spelling error in 'skorts'.

I would also run the site through http://validator.w3.org/ as some of the code needs a bit of attention!

Hope you don't mind the comments, they're the things I prefer to hear before I show work to a client.

Thanks,

Skorts is however a real item of clothing.. :)

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